Midweek Makeover

So, I saw a visualisation on the BBC Sport website, looking at Rafa Nadal's Grand Slam career performance after his first round knock-out at the hands of Fernando Verdasco. Looking at it, it's fairly straightforward to read, but it just doesn't look right - it felt as though they'd used the wrong type of chart to visualise this data. So I thought I'd attempt to make it over, see if I could do any better. Judge for yourself!